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Feeling Lost by ~happy-eskimo15:iconhappy-eskimo15:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Fixed


I'm lying alone with thoughts of you
Thinking of you until it hurts
I know you feel this too, but can we do
Tormented and torn apart
I wish I could see your smile on your face
For times when my life feels so low
It would make me believe what tomorrow could bring
When today doesn't really know

I'm so lost without you
I know you are right, but we're so far apart
I'm nothing without you
I can't wait for you to return home, back to me

I want you to come back and hold me so close
Away from this long lonely nights
I'm reaching for you, can you feel me there
And what would you say if I called you right now
And said that I need you, baby
Would you come back home tonight?
And run into my arms
Oh, I miss you way too much.
©2005-2009 ~happy-eskimo15
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~Free-Bird Sep 2, 2005, 6:01:15 AM
awww this is really sweet, sad too, i know this feeling very well.

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
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~happy-eskimo15 Sep 2, 2005, 6:19:20 AM
Thanks :) Pity we cant see them huh?

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---Louise Loves Him!---
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~coolvamp007 Sep 3, 2005, 12:05:49 PM
Very beautiful and sad.
Love this sentence a lot: I know you are right, but we're so far apart

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Regrets are a waste of time. They're the past crippling you in the present.
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~Free-Bird Sep 3, 2005, 12:49:27 PM
it always is.

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
:iconhappy-eskimo15:
~happy-eskimo15 Sep 4, 2005, 5:14:36 AM
Thank you, i am very glad you liked it :D

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---Louise Loves Him!---
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~HeavenCent Sep 4, 2005, 9:53:38 PM
aww really sad I can relate my b/fs far away and i always feel like that. every day.

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I'll Always love you, David. :hug: :love: :kiss:
'I'll be seeing you'
" to forgive you must move on to move on you must let go...."
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~happy-eskimo15 Sep 5, 2005, 4:41:56 AM
Aww, *hands bar of chocolate* everything can be solved by chocolate right?? Hmm.... I feel sorry for you though, how far away does he live?

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---Louise Loves Him!---
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~HeavenCent Sep 5, 2005, 8:35:36 AM
he lives about five hours away........... its three hours by train, then ttc(subway( which takes about 20 minutes then two more buses... which takes ne where from 2 hours more sometimnes less depending on trafic. and neither of us drive or own a vehicle ne ways so we see eachother like, once a month someimtes less.... and he seems to be happy with it but it dirvesx me more nuts every day. and now he wants to move in with a friend in a year or so and not me doesnt want to do that for at least a fewq years which i think is dumb because weve already been together over four years!!! sorry we've just been really fightin about that latrely

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I'll Always love you, David. :hug: :love: :kiss:
'I'll be seeing you'
" to forgive you must move on to move on you must let go...."
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~happy-eskimo15 Sep 6, 2005, 10:05:10 AM
No, don't be sorry. I can see where you are coming from. I would be annoyed myself, it must be hard for you!

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---Louise Loves Him!---
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